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Could a caveman understand your homepage? — three questions, no marketing vocabulary

By Donald Miller · Founder StoryBrand and Business Made Simple; author Building a StoryBrand · 2017-10-10 · book · Building a StoryBrand — The Caveman Test

Tier A · TL;DR
Could a caveman understand your homepage? — three questions, no marketing vocabulary

Claim

A homepage's three load-bearing questions can be reduced to a comprehension test: could a caveman — pre-literate, pre-cultural, pre-marketing-savvy — look at the page and immediately know (a) what you offer, (b) how it will make their life better, and (c) what they need to do to buy it? Failing any one of these is failing the page, regardless of how clever the copy is.

Mechanism

Marketers, founders, and product teams accumulate vocabulary specific to their category. They write copy that reads as obvious to insiders and as opaque to outsiders. The Caveman Test strips this away by forcing the message through a hypothetical observer with no prior context. If the message can survive that filter, it will survive the busy buyer with five-seconds of attention. If it can't, the cleverness is consuming calories the buyer won't spend.

Conditions

Holds when:

Fails when:

Evidence

"Could a caveman look at your website and immediately know what you offer, how it will make their life better, and what they need to do to buy it?"

— see raw/expert-content/experts/donald-miller.md line 14.

Signals

Counter-evidence

Anthony Pierri's Five-Second Trinity is a more granular alternative — same intent (immediate comprehension), but adds the named alternative alongside use-case and result. Caveman Test alone may pass even when the page fails to differentiate from competitors.

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